Do you ever catch yourself writing redundant adjectives, like "close proximity"?
Editing tip: if the opposite adjective doesn't make any sense, for example "far proximity," then your original adjective is unnecessary.
Unless you're making a poetic point. For example a couple poring over a crossword puzzle (see, I still have memories of times before children) is in close proximity, while a couple reading separate sections - one reading the Arts section while other reads the obits - may be in far proximity.
Anyway. This evening I walked by a hair salon on which the sign read:
Franchezka Unisex Human Hair.
I'm still trying to figure out the customer interaction they had that made them insert that extra word. Were people bringing in their draft horses?
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10 bucks says they are referring to weaves and extensions that are made with human hair- not synthetic.
aunt b
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